Woah, I got so many different thoughts on what was going on here just from reading those three sentences. I... dont know what to make of it other than to say great job! This has to be my favourite Haiku I've read.
Sometimes that can be a good thing and a bad thing. For poem's like these, I say its a good thing. Especially for the theme, if that was the original theme or something similar, of horror or being tortured/murdered, given its such a used topic, this gives it a more original feel.