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I just want to... "Shh."
But you never let me... "Shh."
I still keep screaming.
11.24.12.
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psychoticidal Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wonderfully dark. I approve.
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samanthakayla Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013
Thanks for the approval (x
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ZephyrFlyer Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This sounds like my life...
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samanthakayla Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
(: Glad people can relate.
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Metamorphous Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
.............Wow.........This could be anything really. I like how obscure it is and how short it is and yet...it makes you feel so much. Good job!!
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samanthakayla Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
Thanks. (: Wasn't expecting so much attention on this one, but it's definitely appreciated.
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Metamorphous Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
:D well it is awesome and your welcome!
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0hgravity Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
oddly resonate to my situation.

an interesting piece.
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samanthakayla Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
Not really odd that it's relatable, because it's pretty vague. But thanks.
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0hgravity Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
hmmm yes but it's odd because it's probably not in the way you think.
welcome.
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samanthakayla Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
So enlighten me.
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:icon0hgravity:
0hgravity Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
has to do with my grandmother.
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samanthakayla Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
Guessing you have an unsupportive/condescending one.
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0hgravity Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
oh, quite the contrary.
she has reached the age when shouting/expression is a difficult thing to control...
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samanthakayla Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
Ah. /: Sorry to hear it.
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Coeb Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
Woah, I got so many different thoughts on what was going on here just from reading those three sentences. I... dont know what to make of it other than to say great job! :aww: This has to be my favourite Haiku I've read.
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samanthakayla Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
Thanks so much! I don't usually like leaving things open-ended but it's true for this one—you can relate it to whatever you want. (:
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Coeb Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
Sometimes that can be a good thing and a bad thing. For poem's like these, I say its a good thing. Especially for the theme, if that was the original theme or something similar, of horror or being tortured/murdered, given its such a used topic, this gives it a more original feel.
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samanthakayla Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
I'm confused as to where you got horror, but thanks ^^'
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Coeb Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
I have an evil mind, bahaha. Butyes, when I first clicked this poem, I thought horror. No need to ask.
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samanthakayla Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
(x It's fine. Being morbid is okay.
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kkp29 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
This is interesting, and makes the mind think. What situation is this set in? A romance quarrel? An internal conflict, or an external conflict? This is so cool c:
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samanthakayla Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
Thank you!
Do you really want to know or should I let you wonder? (x
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kkp29 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
I'me afraid of what I might think of...I have a weird imagination...what is it?
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